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一 棵 小 花

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多谢大侠?奖!

「一 花"比较艰深,易发国际,"一 花"比拟高雅。自谦一点故采用 「一 花"。「一 ? 花"则分歧适。一 花可开不仅一 ? 花。

英文确当初式其时态较广,时间可拉长,易发国际。可与当初进行式融会或配合。譬如:

Only that which is growing on stone

knows how hard it is to stay alive,易发国际.

就配合的很好。

这里的growing on stone 实际上可看作是个动名词片语而作形容词用作is的补语。

英文诗可不讲文法但要讲对称与节奏。用字与句型(除非成心)仅量不要重复。

你看这样就合乎美学:

Only that which is growing on stone

knows how hard it is to stay alive.

Only that which grows under stone

knows how hard it is to rise.



这样写诚然文法较佳,但美学就稍差:

Only that which is growing on stone

knows how hard it is to stay alive.

Only that which is growing under stone

knows how hard it is to rise.

这可能只是我的偏见偏好。请勿见笑。再次多谢!




2014/04/04 13:37答复